Feedback Of My Classmates Presentation
In this case, I will talk about my classmate's projects which are advertisements, their strengths and their weaknesses about them. Generally, I would like to say, our major are completely different and this is the first experience for all of us. Therefore, if I write something, that is just my opinion.
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Monica
I want to start with strengths of her because I found a lot of positive point in her project and presentation. her research is excellent, she is creative and has critical thinking. she thought about all part of her advertisement such as colour, shapes, notes. the presentation was short and full of information, related to her route. I didn't find any negative point, just as my idea, I think she should write big that is the workshop of glass because maybe I think this is about theatre.
Flora
very creative idea, great photography and related to her route. In my opinion, she should write notes on her advertisement, especially her bag was handmade and it is very important and different. In addition, for her Instagram advertisement, in my opinion, she should avoid the effect on her picture because it can be caused we didn't see the original colour of her bag.
Asma
the process of her work is organised very well, creative idea, she focused on a picture, short note and full of information. In my opinion, that advertisement which is on a red carpet is more effective than others because of font, colours of font and nice background.
Josie
effective advertisement, in a glance I can understand what is the intention of an advertisement, creative idea, but in my opinion, she should say is it about a doctor, product, compony or generally about healthy.
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